Response 2
"My name is Akrin. I've had some sad things
done to me, but none as sad as this. I got taken
away from my family by two men, and have to be a
slave of Princess Rákóczi. She feels
sorry for me. She told me although she is a princess
she can't say who is her slave or not."
I see, and you're beginning to go into the story
of how she became the slave. I very much like the
way you made it at this moment..."I've had
some sad things done to me, but none as sad as this".
You see there's the voice, Lewis is beginning to
get into the voice of that character so we would
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